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Kevin Francis

Peter,

Quite frankly, this gem of a post appears to have been overlooked by most people! LOL!

This was the first letter I ever wrote out longhand and I remember thinking how the writer really had "created" something and really provided a great example of presenting the features of the product (some of which are pretty ordinary, as you say)in a compelling fashion.

I remember being very impressed and that might explain why I have 3 Amex cards!

Excellent example and this idea can be used in many ways (e.g. calling a continuity program a "VIP Membership").

Thanks again. I certainly appreciate this post.

Kevin Francis

Copywriter :: Peter Stone

Kevin,

It's good to hear from you ... thank you for your comments.

...A prime example of selling the sizzle, not the steak, no?

--Peter

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