For those who celebrate the occasion, happy Thanksgiving. For those who don't ... happy Thursday. (-:
This copywriting video critique takes us to the U.K. coast. The owner of the subject site acts similarly to a broker ... as a go-between ... for upscale homeowners who wish to rent their homes out on a short-term basis and to those who wish to rent homes for a holiday.
I used the method of transition which appears in the Amex letter to pull the site together into a simpler format.
The properties are beautiful, but the site owner's conversion rates are not. Let's see if we can change that for him -- be sure to leave any comments and point out what I missed.
Too, send along a link to whatever you want commented -- a letter, a website, or identify one of the classics to me and we'll take it from there.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.