I began this copywriting critique a couple of times, yesterday.
Serious storms blew through, complete with hail, high winds, thunder and lightning. So I shut down.
I suppose it was two weeks ago, during a storm of similar intensity, I was under my toilet, tightening the nut on the fill valve I had just installed, when wham.
The bathroom lit up lightning blue and I heard what sounded like an explosion.
It was an explosion.
"OSAMA!" I thought.
But no. Lightning had struck a two-story tall tree that stood all the way across the little lake I live on. The lightning didn't split the tree, or knock it over.
It must've boiled the sap, because it blew up the tree until there were only spindles, splinters and duck soup left. Poor duck.
He won't be watching any more vids, but you can...
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